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I am humor-impaired, in terms of jokes and set-ups, and conscious puns; thus, I turned to wikipedia, Google, and other such sites to find a pun to put into the WFC. On one such site they had the knock-knock joke:
Knock, knock. There you have it, the unacknowledged pun. Everything else was accidental, came with the writing, and for the record, aethucyn, Jude really is 3/4 Alaskan Native American, 1/4 Italian. (I agree that Brianna's reaction wasn't right, but I wrote the thing in less than an hour and didn't edit it. It went someplace different than I thought.) Also for the record, I agree with fleece that the story is "okay." For the most part it is as Kellnerin observed, merely good banter. toxicfur noted that it seemed like part of something longer. I noted in the beginning that the word count was tough for me to make, so you got only gravy instead of meat as well. Blue Oregon said it contains a tell or two, but I have no idea what that means, other than they told a couple of jokes. persimmon decided it was not a story about food, but about bad jokes. The entire story is a bad joke that I gave away in my commentary. They're chewing the fat.
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